
Parataxis and hypotaxis change how a sentence makes you wait
Try two short passages to hear how parataxis and hypotaxis organise clauses, pace a scene and change what a narrator seems to emphasise.
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Try two short passages to hear how parataxis and hypotaxis organise clauses, pace a scene and change what a narrator seems to emphasise.

Separate the narrator’s voice from the perspective limiting a scene. A short invented example makes focalisation easier to notice in your next novel.

When a landscape seems to share a character’s feelings, look closely at the narration. Pathetic fallacy can reveal mood, perspective or a deliberate mismatch.

Read a dramatic monologue by listening for the speaker, the silent audience and the details that escape the speaker’s intended story.

Hypallage shifts a description to an unexpected word. Try a close-reading exercise that shows how a transferred epithet can change the atmosphere of a sentence.

Synecdoche lets a part stand for a whole. Use a few original examples to see how the choice of detail can change a sentence’s emphasis and tone.